Okay so here's a fully finished test sript. I really enjoyed this one too, i felt that these characters kinda suited my animated style a bit more. I had tons of fun wrkin on the designs, and this was the first time i ever had to draw double page spreads, which was also pretty fun.
The basic story here is, (and emphasis on basic) all the guys are out having a laugh, all of a sudden one of them bursts into a ball of flames, everybody is sorta stunned by it, as nobody knew that Liz had mutant abilities. Johny storm kinda gets the blame for it, n then he has to go n do sum Fantastic 4 work. Admist all of the confusion we see that Kong tells Peter that he knows Peter is Spider-man which leads to more confusion. Spidey and Iceman catching up with Liz and having a long talk trying to hellp Liz come to terms with her new powers. And then we have a big intro From Magneto! Gud stuff!
Oh yeh n i almost forgot to mention. Liz (the girl whos on fire) tries to cover herself up thru most of my take on this script for a gud reason. As most of us who read comics know and are used to fire and all kinds of other powers naturally covering the body, but Liz the character does not know this. She has just turned into a big ball of flames infront of her friends all her clothes were burnt so it would be a natural reaction for her and anybody else to try and cover themselves up. as the story progresses you will see her not trying to cover herself up as by that stage she has realised that she does not need to. that is all.
so here's the test scripts , n here's hoping.
11 comments:
These are really good man, strong layouts and reads real well! nice work, your style def works better with spidey but the frank pages work too, liking the whole mma thing, good job man, all the best with these! nice
Cheers Kev thanks a mill
Looks great man, well done!
Yah I am impressed.
You knocked that one out of the park didn't ya scamp!! love the page with Firegirl blasting Spidey and towards the end the 3 x 7 double spreads are fantastic...and then the last few where you can see you really got into it and went for it - showcases your pencils and skills extremely well. You should be proud - completely Marvel and yet totally Ben if that makes any sense!
Thanks guys, i really appreciate the comments
Sweet! Fantastic all the way thru, but have to admit, totally love full-page Magneto at the end, great angle.
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cool work Ben.
yo! the blog has just gone up about 2 levels!! looking waay better!...nice work!
These are even better than I imagined they'd be. I hope something comes of these trails. Do Ballyer proud!
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